How to write a presentable essay – step 4

Throughout my teaching career for more than two decades in various countries –  both Canada and Malaysia, I have come across that majority of the teachers or tuition centres foster students to be more materialistic by rewarding a stream of scholars with “stars”, gifts, etc. 

I would like to this golden opportunity to seek parents from stop learning from those teachers.  Or kids won’t be fully aware of the importance of learning. Inevitably, money is not one of the indispensable commodities. 

My philosophy is as easy as ABC. No reward and punishment system, I only INSPIRE AND ENCOURAGE STUDENTS. 

I have trained more than 3,000 students who believe in my teaching philosophy in 21 years. 

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